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Tips on the making air travel more enjoyable.

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I have a some tips for making air travel more enjoyable.

Role No, 1
I prepare a foot stuff, Because my foot did't approched on the floor (I'm just 155cm)
Role No,2
I wear a long skirt or comportable clothes. It is freely to move or change the position.
Role No. 3
I prepare a movie or music without internet connect. Likes youtube music
Role No, 4
I take a selfie and edit or take a picture to outside cloud
Role No. 5
I clean up my sell-phone storage space ( erase useless photos, videos, APP etc)
Role No. 6
I read a book or write a diary or plan to trip.

I was repeat role 1 through role 6, i will arrive at the destination. I spend my air travel time like this.

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Good afternoon Hailey!
I guess you really miss travelling :) 
I have a some tips for making air travel more enjoyable.
>>> CORRECT! 
Role No, 1
>>> Rule No. 1 
I prepare a foot stuff, Because my foot did't approched on the floor (I'm just 155cm)
>>> I prepare a foot stuff, because my foot can't reach the ground. (I'm just 155cm)
Role No,2
>>> Rule No. 2 
I wear a long skirt or comportable clothes. 
>>> I wear a long skirt or a comfortable clothes. 
It is freely to move or change the position.
>>> It is freely move or change position.
Role No. 3
>>> Rule No. 3 
I prepare a movie or music without internet connect. 
>>> I prepare a movie or music without needing the internet. 
Likes youtube music
>>> Mostly from YouTube music. 
Role No, 4
>>> Rule No. 4
I take a selfie and edit or take a picture to outside cloud
>>> I take selfies and edit it. 
Role No. 5
>>> Rule No. 5
I clean up my sell-phone storage space ( erase useless photos, videos, APP etc)
>>> I delete useless photos, videos or APPS from my cellphone. 
Role No. 6
>>> Rule No. 6 
I read a book or write a diary or plan to trip.
>>> I read a book, write a diary, or plan a trip.
I was repeat role 1 through role 6, i will arrive at the destination. 
>>> I repeat the all the rules until I arrive in my destination. 
I spend my air travel time like this.
>>> CORRECT! 

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