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Do you want your children to have their own cars at this point of their lives?

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Nope!
I want my children to have their own cars until they are older and get their jobs.
My son has his driving license. He can drive a car more soothly than I according to my husband. And he really want to get his own car and buy a used car after completing his military service. So we discuss about this problem a lot. Our conclusion is as follows. We allow him to use my car on weekend in case that he gets daily car insurance in advance. As for my daughter, she doesn't have a driver's license yet.

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Hello Joshua!

As you have mentioned in class, the younger the driver, the more expensive the insurance the person has to pay. Hence, driving young can be costly. Setting rules can be beneficial so that your children can be more responsible and liable at all times.

Thank you for this answer to today's homework question. Kindly go over some minute details for suggestion.

See you again in class soon.

-T. Donna =)

Nope!
>> Correct!

I want my children to have their own cars until they are older and get their jobs.
>> Correct!

My son has his driving license. He can drive a car more soothly than I according to my husband. 
>> Correct! 
Or: driver's license; smoothly

And he really want to get his own car and buy a used car after completing his military service. 
>> And he really wants to get his own car and buy a used car after completing his military service. 

So we discuss about this problem a lot. Our conclusion is as follows. 
>> Correct!

We allow him to use my car on weekend in case that he gets daily car insurance in advance. 
>> Correct!

As for my daughter, she doesn't have a driver's license yet.
>> Correct!
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