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What do you think are the qualities of a good leader?

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I think that a good leader should has three of thing. First, The leader has a goal. Because the leader should lead people to the destination where is many people want. Second,the leader put plans into action by himself. The last thing is that the leader should listen other people's opinions and distinguish which opinions are right or wrong. The last thing is the most difficult.

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Hello Hwanny, 
Thank you for your homework. You made very good points about what qualities a leader should have. I agree with all of them, thank you for sharing your opinions with me. 
Regards,
T. Angelica 
I think that a good leader should has three of thing. 
>> I think that a good leader should have three of these qualities. 
First, The leader has a goal. Because the leader should lead people to the destination where is many people want. 
>> First, the leader should have a goal because they should be able to lead people to the destination where many people want. 
Second,the leader put plans into action by himself. 
>>Second, the leader should be able to put plans into action by himself. 
The last thing is that the leader should listen other people's opinions and distinguish which opinions are right or wrong. 
>>Lastly, the leader should listen to other people's opinions and distinguish which opinions are right or wrong. 
The last thing is the most difficult.
>>The last quality is the most difficult. 
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