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If Coronavirus is a kind of the infectious diseases, I think even children need to be shot for their safe.

Of course we cannot be sure perfectly of the effect and safty of the vaccine.

Anyway we don't have any other choice except vaccine in the current situation.

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Good morning Ms. Lily! Thank you for sharing your thoughts today. Keep safe!
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If Coronavirus is a kind of the infectious diseases, I think even children need to be shot for their safe.
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Coronavirus is a kind of infectious diseases, I think even children need to be shot for their safety.
Of course we cannot be sure perfectly of the effect and safty of the vaccine.
>>> Of course, we are not sure of the full effectivity and safety of the vaccine.
Anyway we don't have any other choice except vaccine in the current situation.
>>> Anyway, We don't have any other choice except the vaccine in the current situation.
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