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Do you enjoy learning about other countries’ customs?

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2021-09-02 264

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I'm interested in learning about another country's customs. Since I came to the USA, I have experienced various of the American's custom. I think that Americans are usually very kind. Also, Americans love talking with people.

For instance, when I go to the grocery store, "How are you?" a staff member who doesn't know the person asks me. In addition, I often saw that while I am taking a walk, people who I don't know say hello to each other. When I came to the USA, for the first time, I avoided people who speak English. Because people who don't know tried to talk to me when their eyes were facing me. Now, I know that is their custom. So I don't avoid them so far.

I'm obviously interested in learning about another country's customs. But it is sometimes hard to adjust to me. I want to understand their customs as much as I can. It takes time to understand and act another country's custom. It's as important as learning a language.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Ji Seon, thank you for this. Have a great day!
Jasmin. 

I'm interested in learning about another country's customs.
>>I'm interested to learn about other countries customs. 
Since I came to the USA, I have experienced various of the American's custom.
>>Since I came to the USA, I have experienced various American tradition and customs.
I think that Americans are usually very kind. Also, Americans love talking with people.
>>I think Americans are usually very kind and they also love talking to people. 

For instance, when I go to the grocery store, "How are you?" a staff member who doesn't know the person asks me.
>>For instance, when I go the grocery store a staff will approach me and ask me how I am doing. 
In addition, I often saw that while I am taking a walk, people who I don't know say hello to each other.
>>In addition, While I am taking a walk, I often see strangers saying hi to each other.
When I came to the USA, for the first time, I avoided people who speak English.
>>When I first came to the USA, I avoided people who speak English. 
Because people who don't know tried to talk to me when their eyes were facing me.
>>Because strangers tried to talk to me when I met their eyes. 
Now, I know that is their custom. So I don't avoid them so far.
>>Now I know that it is one of their customs. So I don't avoid them any longer. 

I'm obviously interested in learning about another country's customs.
>>I'm obviously interested to learn about other countries customs.
But it is sometimes hard to adjust to me. I want to understand their customs as much as I can.
>>But it is sometimes hard to adapt to the situation. I want to understand their customs as much as I can. 
It takes time to understand and act another country's custom. It's as important as learning a language.
>>It takes time to understand and adapt to other's customs and tradition but it is as important as learning a new language. 
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