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The current government started as a progressive party.
But their political capabilities are very low and diplomatic power power even is lack.
Then are not interested in importing vaccines and in the survival of the people.
They lied several times we had vaccines.
They only concern continuing in power.

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Happy Thursday Ms. Lily! Thank you once again for sharing your thought through writing. Keep reaching your goal :)
~Aki :)
The current government started as a progressive party.
>>> CORRECT
OR >>> The current administration started as a progressive party.
But their political capabilities are very low and diplomatic power power even is lack.
>>> But their political capabilities are very low and they even lack of diplomatic power.
Then are not interested in importing vaccines and in the survival of the people.
>>> They are not interested in importing vaccines and in the survival of the people.
>>> They don't show interest in acquiring the vaccines for the survival of the people.
They lied several times we had vaccines.
>>> They lied several times that we have vaccines.
>>> They  had been lying about the availability of the vaccine.
They only concern continuing in power.
>>> They are only concerned in continuing their power.
>>> Their only concern is to continue their power.
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