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Teacher, Jane
My cafe staff a day off today. She`s day off her goes to her hometown.
She doesn`t health so, check in at the hospital.
After brewing coffee beans in a cafe and fermenting the coffee grounds, it`s after fermentation for 1~2 weeks.
It`s used as a nutrient for plants in doors in cafe that twice a year.
If you supply nutrients twice a year in early spring and autumn. Plants bloom healthily and are excellent for interior effects.
As them enter the cafe, flower paths are made on both sides and customers smile at the flowers and say they feel happy for a while.

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Hello Rara!!!!

Great job on you homework!!!!

Believe tat you can achieve your goals in English and you'll be successful. Believe in yourself!!!!

T. Jeny

Teacher, Jane
>>Teacher Jeny,
My cafe staff a day off today. 
>>It's my staff's day-off today.
She`s day off her goes to her hometown.
>>She went to her hometown.
She doesn`t health so, check in at the hospital.

>>She doesn't feel good, so she needs a check-up in the hospital.

After brewing coffee beans in a cafe and fermenting the coffee grounds, it`s after fermentation for 1~2 weeks.
>>Brewing coffee beans and fermenting the coffee grounds will take 2 weeks.
It`s used as a nutrient for plants in doors in cafe that twice a year.
>>It is used as a nutrient for indoor plants twice a year.
If you supply nutrients twice a year in early spring and autumn, 
 Plants bloom healthily and are excellent for interior effects.
>>If you supply nutrients twice a year in early spring and autumn,  the plants will bloom healthily and will have excellent interior effects.
As them enter the cafe, flower paths are made on both sides and customers smile at the flowers and say they feel happy for a while.
>>In the entrance of my cafe, there are flowers pots on both sides and customers smile and feel happy looking at them.
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