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영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
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담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

How do you refresh your mind throughout the workday?

작성자: 류*선
2021-09-03 273

회원님의 영작문

I spend most of the time with my daughter. Despite loving her, taking care of her is so labor demanding. So, while she's sleeping, I also take the chance to sleep. After taking a nap, my body and mind are refreshed. Also, I like listening to classical music to relax during the day. Furthermore, I meet my counselor twice a week. It's really helpful to remain healthy mental. After my daughter goes to bed in the evening, I can spend my time on my own time only for me. Every evening, I read the Bible, study English and learn to educate for baby through Youtube. I am interested in those things a lot. but I always don't have enough time to do them. I usually have sleep deprivation. because when I do them, I make my sleep time shorter. Before I gave birth to my baby, I loved writing my essay. I'm interested in expressing people and nature through writing and photography.  If I have a chance to do that, I want to spend time doing them. 

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

The good thing about you is that you try to have your me time, Jane! Someday, things will be better!-Faith-
I spend most of the time with my daughter. 
>> I spend most of my time with my daughter. 
Despite loving her, taking care of her is so labor demanding. 
>> Despite my love for her, taking care of her is so demanding. 
So, while she's sleeping, I also take the chance to sleep.
>> CORRECT
After taking a nap, my body and mind are refreshed. 
>> CORRECT
OR After dozing off, my body and mind are refreshed. 
Also, I like listening to classical music to relax during the day. 
>> CORRECT
OR Also, I am into listening to classical music to relax during the day. 
Furthermore, I meet my counselor twice a week.
>> CORRECT
OR Furthermore, I have a counseling biweekly.
It's really helpful to remain healthy mental. 
 >> It's really helpful to remain mentally healthy. 
After my daughter goes to bed in the evening, I can spend my time on my own time only for me. 
>> After my daughter goes to bed in the evening, I can spend my time on my own. 
Every evening, I read the Bible, study English and learn to educate for baby through Youtube. 
>> Every evening, I read the Bible, study English and learn about how to educate a baby through YouTube. 
I am interested in those things a lot. but I always don't have enough time to do them. 
>> I am interested in those things a lot, but I always don't have enough time to do them. 
I usually have sleep deprivation. because when I do them, I make my sleep time shorter. 
>> I usually have sleep deprivation because when I do them, I make my sleep time shorter. 
Before I gave birth to my baby, I loved writing my essay. 
>> Before I gave birth to my baby, I loved writing essays.
I'm interested in expressing people and nature through writing and photography. 
>> I'm interested in expressing myself to other people and nature through writing and photography. 
 If I have a chance to do that, I want to spend time doing them. 
>>CORRECT
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