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It is increasing of primium for social insurance like Health insurance and Employment insurance etc.

The government is spending too much money for unemployment benefits.

It is the result of populism.

Salary men like me are very worry about the irrarional policies of government.

Even we have to pay more taxes in the present, eventually we will get less pension in the future.

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It is increasing of primium for social insurance like Health insurance and Employment insurance etc.
>>> There is an increase in premiums for social insurances like Health and Employment.
The government is spending too much money for unemployment benefits.
>>>  The government is spending too much money on unemployment benefits.
It is the result of populism.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> It is the outcome of populism.
Salary men like me are very worry about the irrarional policies of government.
>>>  Salarymen like me are very worried about the irrational policies of the government.
Even we have to pay more taxes in the present, eventually we will get less pension in the future.
>>> We even have to pay more taxes at present and eventually, we will get less pension in the future.
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