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What things do you like shop?

-> I usually shop for clothes or shoes that I wear when I go out to work.
Also, I tend to do online shopping rather than offline shopping. Offline shopping is cheaper and more convenient for me.

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Hello Bo Im, happy new week!

Shopping for things that we need for work is justified. Since we need to look presentable all the time when we meet people, it sends the impression that we respect them. Shopping for clothes is fun and it shows what kind of fashion sense we have.

I thank you for this answer again, well done!

See you in less than an hour. 

-T. Donna =)

I usually shop for clothes or shoes that I wear when I go out to work.
>> Correct!

Also, I tend to do online shopping rather than offline shopping. Offline shopping is cheaper and more convenient for me.
>> Correct!
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