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Homework {09/06}

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Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. I made some hieroglyphics and also cuneiforms.
2. There are floodwaters inside buses and subways.
3. You have to look it up on Wikipedia but she have to look it up on Google.
4. She checks temperature everyday for her fashion.
5. I saw the Guinness Book of World Records and I was so surprised. However, my friend thought It is dangerous.

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Hi Clair!

Thanks for sending your homework promptly. Here are the corrections.

Cheers,
Jean~~



                         Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.

1. I made some hieroglyphics and also cuneiforms.
>> correct~~

2. There are floodwaters inside buses and subways.
>> correct~~

3. You have to look it up on Wikipedia but she have to look it up on Google.
>>  You have to look it up on Wikipedia but she has to look it up on Google.

4. She checks temperature everyday for her fashion.
>> She checks the temperature every day for her fashion. [The word "everyday" is one word and an adjective. We use to describe something that's seen or used every day. It means ¡°ordinary¡± or ¡°typical.¡± "Every day" is an adverb and has two words; it simply means ¡°each day¡± or "daily." 

5. I saw the Guinness Book of World Records and I was so surprised. However, my friend thought It is dangerous.
>>  I saw the Guinness Book of World Records and I was so surprised. However, my friend thought some of the challenges or activities recorded are dangerous.

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