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How long do you study before your exam? Please tell me about your study schedule.

작성자: 류*선
2021-09-07 446

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Before my exam I tend to study hard. I don't have enough time to study English because I have to take care of my baby. So I usually use time for exams or homework, in my free time after my baby goes to bed. One month ago, I took a virtual English class. My teacher gave me some homework every day. Also I had a midterm exam, final exam. It was really helpful for me. But my teacher led her students through many discussions, tasks, and collaboration work during the class. It was a very tight schedule for me. I crammed so much into my brain. Sometimes, I was exhausted. I usually stayed up late to do homework, tasks etc. I had sleep deprivation. As a result, my body was losing health. I quitted my class to take a rest. Now I'm finding the best way to study English for my schedule on my own. If I don't have a plan to do a list, my today will fly fast in a wink. Before studying, I need to manage my health. These days, I try to focus on vocabulary and speaking in English every evening. Thank!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Jane! Your journey might have been so challenging just to improve your English skills, but with persistence, you will achieve your dream!-Faith-
Before my exam I tend to study hard. 
>> CORRECT
OR Prior to my exam, I give it my best shot to get a good score. 
I don't have enough time to study English because I have to take care of my baby. 
>> CORRECT
OR Because I need to look after my baby, I don't have ample time to study English.
So I usually use time for exams or homework, in my free time after my baby goes to bed. 
>> So, I usually use my free time, which is after my baby goes to bed, for my exam preparations or homework  
One month ago, I took a virtual English class. 
>> CORRECT
My teacher gave me some homework every day. 
>> My teacher would give me some homework every day.
Also I had a midterm exam, final exam. 
>> Also I had midterm and final exams.
It was really helpful for me. 
>> CORRECT
OR It was a tremendous help.
But my teacher led her students through many discussions, tasks, and collaboration work during the class. 
>> CORRECT 
It was a very tight schedule for me. 
>> CORRECT
OR I really had a hectic schedule that time.
I crammed so much into my brain. 
>> I crammed so many things/a lot of information into my brain. 
Sometimes, I was exhausted. 
>> CORRECT
I usually stayed up late to do homework, tasks etc. 
>> I usually stayed up late to do my homework, tasks, etc. 
I had sleep deprivation. 
>> CORRECT
As a result, my body was losing health. 
>> As a result, I was losing health. 
OR Thus, my health was deteriorating.
I quitted my class to take a rest. 
>> I quit my class to take a rest. 
Now I'm finding the best way to study English for my schedule on my own. 
>> CORRECT
If I don't have a plan to do a list, my today will fly fast in a wink. 
>> If I don't have a to-do list, my days will fly fast in a wink. 
Before studying, I need to manage my health. 
>> Before studying again, I needed to manage my health. 
These days, I try to focus on vocabulary and speaking in English every evening. 
>> These days, I try to focus on English vocabulary and speaking every evening. 
Thank!
>> Thanks!
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