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Most of Asian tend to envy Wstern appearance and Western culture.

Because historial and diplomatic point of view, the West always control the world.

The Est was civilized by the West, forced or voluntarily.

Asian tend to perceive the West is superor to us.

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Most of Asian tend to envy Wstern appearance and Western culture.
>>> Most  Asians tend to envy the Western appearance and its culture.
Because historial and diplomatic point of view, the West always control the world.
>>> Because in historical and diplomatic point of view, the West has always been controlling the World.
The Est was civilized by the West, forced or voluntarily.
>>> The East was civilized by the West, by force, or voluntarily.
Asian tend to perceive the West is superor to us.
>>> Asians tend to perceive the West as superior to us.
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