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What do you always consider when buying things?

--> I really hate that I find it out later that I bought it expensive when I buy something.
Therefore, when I buy something, I compare prices online very much and buy it in the cheapest way.
Also, I tend to buy it after thinking deeply about whether I will use it well.

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Hello Bo Im!

This is what we call "getting your money's worth". This is the whole point being of buying anything we use or consume, otherwise, for what are we spending our money. Nowadays, we need to think critically when we purchase something as there are always competing brands and nuisance everywhere.

Hence, spending wisely saves money to spend another day. Thanks for this honest and meaningful answer. See you in a few hours.

-T. Donna =)

I really hate that I find it out later that I bought it expensive when I buy something.
>> Correct!

Therefore, when I buy something, I compare prices online very much and buy it in the cheapest way.
> > Correct!

Also, I tend to buy it after thinking deeply about whether I will use it well.
>>Correct!

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