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Writing a book

작성자: 김*주
2021-09-07 210

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This january, I started to write books. When I read books I was thought of my storys. So I wanted to write it in my book. So I started to write it. It was very excited and it was hard too. Beacause I have to read my story again and again and I have to fix it and fix it. So it was little boaring too. But When I Ended one book, I was very proud of my self. So now I'll tell you about book. I writes about fantasy, reasoning and little survival. it is very fun

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sueng Ju,
Thank you for sharing your ideas about writing a book. Writing a book is not an easy job. It takes a lot of time to complete a book. Many people don't write a book because it's extremely hard. Forcing yourself to sit down, brainstorm, write, edit, rewrite, edit, cut, add, rewrite, workshop, rewrite, and rewrite some more until you've got somewhere between 50,000 and 100,000 words is grueling work. Keep writing a book to express what's in your mind.  ~ Teacher Quenny
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This january, I started to write books.
>> This January, I started to write books.
 When I read books I was thought of my storys. 
>> When I read books I'm thinking to write my story. 
So I wanted to write it in my book. 
>>So I wanted to write a story and make my own book. 
So I started to write it. 
>>So I started to write a story. 
It was very excited and it was hard too. 
>> It was very exciting and it was hard too. 
Beacause I have to read my story again and again and I have to fix it and fix it. 
>> Because I have to read my story again and again as well as I have to fix it and fix it to make it easy to understand. 
So it was little boaring too. 
>>So it was a little boring too. 
But When I Ended one book, I was very proud of my self. 
>> But when I finished one book, I was very proud of myself. 
So now I'll tell you about book. 
>>So now I'll tell you about the book. 
I writes about fantasy, reasoning and little survival. it is very fun
>>  I write about fantasy, reasoning, and little survival and it is very fun
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This january, I started to write books. When I read books I was thought of my storys. So I wanted to write it in my book. So I started to write it. It was very excited and it was hard too. Beacause I have to read my story again and again and I have to fix it and fix it. So it was little boaring too. But When I Ended one book, I was very proud of my self. So now I'll tell you about book. I writes about fantasy, reasoning and little survival. it is very fun
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