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I can understand that twilight divorcees are increasing recently.

The average life span is longer than previous, so they don'r want to live with boring husband until they die.

Even though they want to divorce in the early of marrage, they can't it because of young children and they are afraid of being divorcee.

As getting older, women have courage and can choose even divorce.

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Hi there Ms. Lily! Thank you for doing the essay! Have a nice day! 
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I can understand that twilight divorcees are increasing recently.
>>> 
I understand that twilight divorce is increasing recently.
The average life span is longer than previous, so they don'r want to live with boring husband until they die.
>>> 
The average life span is longer than previous years, so they don't want to live with a boring husband until they die.
Even though they want to divorce in the early of marrage, they can't it because of young children and they are afraid of being divorcee.
>>>
Even though they want to get divorced in their early  marriage, they can't do it because their children are still young and they are afraid of getting divorced.
As getting older, women have courage and can choose even divorce.
>>> Getting older, women have become courageous and can even choose to get divorced.
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