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my house have very many characteristics.
first, we have very wide living room.
Second, we have very long corridor
Third, we have many furniture in my house.
Finally, we have very many rooms.

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my house have very many characteristics.
>> My house has so many characteristics.

first, we have very wide living room.
>> First, we have a very wide living room.
OR
>> First, we have a spacious living room.

Second, we have very long corridor
>> Second, we have a very long corridor.

Third, we have many furniture in my house.
>> Third, we have a lot of furniture in my house.

Finally, we have very many rooms.
>> Finally, we have so many rooms.

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