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Why do speakers incorporate body movements while talking or giving presentations to their audience?

작성자: 김*국
2021-09-08 352

회원님의 영작문

Body language is also a tool of communication. As you know, there is a sign language that is used with deaf person.
It is also international communication language.
I sometimes wonder what it would be like if sign language instead of English bacame the universal of the world.
Because most people who live in non-English speaking area don't need to study English.
They can save money and time for study English. For some people like English teacher, it would be oppsite situation.
Anyway, peoples use a lot their body on communicating with others. Speakers and presentationers want to notice clear and easy to their partner and audience their meaning.
They also want to express their hand when they deliver on important fact. It means to concentrate the important fact.
I often use my hands with my word to explain direction to foreiner.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Sir Mandeep!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Body language is also a tool of communication. 
>> Body language is also a tool for communication. 
As you know, there is a sign language that is used with deaf person.
>> As you know, there is a sign language that is used for people with disabilities, like deaf or mute.
It is also international communication language.
>> It is also an international communication language.
I sometimes wonder what it would be like if sign language instead of English bacame the universal of the world.
>> I sometimes wonder what it would be like if sign language becomes the universal language instead of English.
Because most people who live in non-English speaking area don't need to study English.
>> Because most people who live in non-English speaking areas don't need to study English.
OR >>  Because most people who live in non-English speaking countries don't need to study English.
They can save money and time for study English. 
>> They can save money and time instead of studying English. 
For some people like English teacher, it would be oppsite situation.
>> For some people like English teachers, it would be an opposite situation.
OR >> For some people like English teachers, it would be the exact opposite.
Anyway, peoples use a lot their body on communicating with others. 
>> Anyway, people use a lot their body movements in communicating with others. 
Speakers and presentationers want to notice clear and easy to their partner and audience their meaning.
>>Speakers and presenters want their partners and audience to understand what they mean.
They also want to express their hand when they deliver on important fact. 
>> They also want to express their hand when they deliver an important fact. 
It means to concentrate the important fact.
>> It means to concentrate on the important fact.
OR >> It means to concentrate on the important information. 
I often use my hands with my word to explain direction to foreiner.
>> I often use my hands when I speak to explain directions to foreigners.

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