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I was happy. why??
Our family will go to travel!!!!!!!!!
We will go to 'GangWonDo HongChun.' with my father's mother.
We planned to go to travel. This is my plan! Let me introduce my plan!
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1. We will wake up early.(5:00 AM)
2. We will escape Seoul to 7:00 AM
3. We will finish the hotel and we will check-in there.
4.We go to water park
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100. We will go to travel fun!

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Our family will go to traveling 

We will travel from Seoul at 7:00 AM

We will check-in a hotel. 

We will go to the water park

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