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What is something that you are very nervous about regarding interviews? Explain briefly.

-In terms of interviews, the fact that someone judges me makes me hesitate to answer even the simple questions. Also, as I already know that interviewers are experts, I worry if my answer sounds unprofessional and wrong. Lastly, I have to look passionate, but I keep calm and act formally in the interviewing and working situation. The more I try to be passionate, the more I get nervous.

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Hi Seo Yun! ^^
I think it is very normal to get nervous during job interviews. You are ahead now because you already know your weak spots during so. All you need to do it work on those. Thanks for sharing. :) 
Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.
In terms of interviews, the fact that someone judges me makes me hesitate to answer even the simple questions. 
>> In terms of interviews, the fact that someone judges me makes me hesitant to answer even the simple questions. 
Also, as I already know that interviewers are experts, I worry if my answer sounds unprofessional and wrong. 
>> Also, as I already know that interviewers are experts so I worry if my answer sounds unprofessional and wrong. 
Lastly, I have to look passionate, but I keep calm and act formaly in the interviewing and working situation. 
>> Lastly, I have to look passionate, but I keep calm and act formally in the interviewing and working situation. 
The more I try to be passionate, the more I get nervous.
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