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30th homework

작성자: 정*영
2021-09-10 319

회원님의 영작문

1. She told me that she loved me.
2. I don’t trust him
3. You can always depend on her(she / her)
4. I don’t know who she is.
5. Where does he live?
6. The teacher scolded him for being late.
7. They have never invited us
8. It took me a long time to get used to living alone.
9. I have been waiting for them for hours.
10. She is richer than he
11. I am not as educated as he is.
12. She is more intelligent than I

Do you know golf well?
I don't know golf at all.
In Korea, Golf is being popular the more these day.
Perhaps many broadcasting company broadcast about golf.
Especially They broadcast a various of Entertainment programs.
My friend who learning the golf told me that It is too expensive but it is fun.
She suggested me to learn the golf together.
Although now I refused her suggest, i will learn the golf someday.
what is your favorite exercise? do you usually enjoy it ?

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Stella,


I would always appreciate the kindness and optimism you've shown.  In addition, you always acknowledge and listen to corrections given to you. Keep doing that because it would help you a lot to improve faster.

Thank you for your homework.

Always Smile!!!

T. Jeny


1. She told me that she loved me.
>>correct
2. I don’t trust him
>>correct
3. You can always depend on her(she / her)
>>correct
4. I don’t know who she is.
>>correct
5. Where does he live?
>>correct
6. The teacher scolded him for being late.
>>correct
7. They have never invited us
>>correct
8. It took me a long time to get used to living alone.
>>correct
9. I have been waiting for them for hours.
>>correct
10. She is richer than he
>>correct
11. I am not as educated as he is.
>>correct
12. She is more intelligent than I

>>She is more intelligent than me.
Do you know golf well?
>>correct
I don't know golf at all.
>>correct
In Korea, Golf is being popular the more these day.
>>In Korea, Golf is becoming more popular these days.
Perhaps many broadcasting company broadcast about golf.
>>Perhaps many broadcasting companies broadcast about golf.
Especially They broadcast a various of Entertainment programs.
>>They broadcast various environmental programs.
My friend who learning the golf told me that It is too expensive but it is fun.
>>My friend who is learning golf told me that it is too expensive but it is fun.
She suggested me to learn the golf together.
>>She suggested me to learn golf together.
Although now I refused her suggest, i will learn the golf someday.
>>Although now I refused her suggestion, I will learn golf someday.
what is your favorite exercise? 
>>correct
do you usually enjoy it ?
>>correct
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첨삭이 가능하며,

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