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What first impressions would you like to leave on your interviewer?
-The first impression of me should be someone good to work with. In the field I am interested in, it's also important to be looked analytical and intelligent. So I have to be tidy and positive at the same time.

How should a person dress during a job interview?
-First of all, the hair should be tied up or look tidy by styling. Also, the outfit should be tidy, like suits and skirts. They would think the more you care about the outfit, the more you are ready and passionate for the job.

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Hi Seo Yun! ^^

What you do before an interview is crucial to your overall performance within it. For best results, many prospective applicants practice the interview process and determine their strengths and weaknesses. It better prepares them for the interview itself and ensures they deliver effective and impactful answers to every question. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

The first impression of me should be someone good to work with. 
>> The first impression about me should be that I am a person who is good to work with. 
In the field I am interested in, it's also important to be looked analytical and intelligent.
>> In the field I am interested in, it's also important to look analytical and intelligent.
So I have to be tidy and positive at the same time.
>> CORRECT
First of all, the hair should be tied up or look tidy by styling. 
>> CORRECT
Also, the outfit should be tidy, like suits and skirts. 
>> CORRECT
They would think the more you care about the outfit, the more you are ready and passionate for the job. 
>> They would think that the more you care about your outfit, the more you are dedicated and passionate you are for the job. 

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