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In your own way, how do you protect the environment? Share your thoughts in a few sentences.

작성자: 정*우
2021-09-13 557

회원님의 영작문

I try to protect the environment by keeping a simple and obvious rules. The rules I want to talk about are the simple routines related to our daily life. I separate the garbage and reduce waste thoroughly. I try not to use unnecessary disposable products. For example, when I use food delivery service at home, I ask them not to pack disposable spoon and chopsticks, then I use my own, which is washable. When I go to the mountain or beach, I try not to dump trash and bring it to home. Like these, I do not have any special strategy to protect the environment, however, I try to keep to basic rules.

Hi Donna, I came back to Seoul last Saturday. Since I changed the hospital, I need to change the class schedule, however, there was not any vacant time on your class. So I inevitably changed the teacher. I feel sorry that I could not say goodbye to you. Your class was helpful and I was really excited when I was talking with you. If there is a chance, I want to take your class again. Bye!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello there Vicky! Happy new week!

Actually I'm a little bit sad that we cannot have class however, I'm very happy for the times we studied together because you displayed skillfulness and discipline like no other. With your new teacher, I am sure you will be just fine. Never lose your passion and drive to be better in English.

Anyway, I am grateful to you for sending me this final essay. These practices are very beneficial to the environment. Every little thing we can do to help the environment is a big help to the world.

I am positive that I will see you again in the future. You are the BEST!

-T. Donna =)

I try to protect the environment by keeping a simple and obvious rules. The rules I want to talk about are the simple routines related to our daily life. 
>> I try to protect the environment by keeping simple and obvious rules. The rules I want to talk about are the simple routines related to our daily lives. 

I separate the garbage and reduce waste thoroughly. I try not to use unnecessary disposable products. For example, when I use food delivery service at home, I ask them not to pack disposable spoon and chopsticks, then I use my own, which is washable. 
>> Correct! 

When I go to the mountain or beach, I try not to dump trash and bring it to home. Like these, I do not have any special strategy to protect the environment, however, I try to keep to basic rules.
>> When I go to the mountain or beach, I try not to dump trash and bring it home. Like these (Through these ways), I do not have any special strategy to protect the environment, however, I try to keep the basic rules.

Hi Donna, I came back to Seoul last Saturday. Since I changed the hospital, I need to change the class schedule, however, there was not any vacant time on your class. 
>> Correct!
Or: no any vacant time/ no vacant time

So I inevitably changed the teacher. I feel sorry that I could not say goodbye to you. Your class was helpful and I was really excited when I was talking with you. 
>> Correct!

If there is a chance, I want to take your class again. Bye!
>> Correct!
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