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What is your unforgettable Chuseok? Answer in a few sentences.

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My father's hometown is really country side.
So When I was young and It was Chuseok holiday, All of our families gathered at my grandmother's house. And we enjoyed the Chuseok holiday together.
But we were not able to do like that after she passed away.
I miss the time so much.

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Hi there Benjamin!

This seems to be a very beautiful picture of how culturally your family must be during Chuseok. Sadly, some old family members must go and leave us. But then, their legacy lives and we need to continue the practice they pass us over time.

Thank you for this reflection of a memorable Chuseok that you had. I hope that you will have a very happy Chuseok this year!

See you in class. ^^

-T. Donna =)

My father's hometown is really country side.
>> My father's hometown is really at the country side.

So When I was young and It was Chuseok holiday, All of our families gathered at my grandmother's house. 
>> Correct!
Or: So when I was young and it was a Chuseok holiday, all of our families gathered at my grandmother's house. 

And we enjoyed the Chuseok holiday together.
>> Correct!

But we were not able to do like that after she passed away.
>> But we were not able to do that after she passed away.

I miss the time so much.
>> Correct!
Or: I miss that time so much.
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