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Since the company is the market leader in digital transformation within the financial market, I believe being a user-friendly communicator would be of the utmost quality to this job.
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Digitization enabled investors to discern market movement in a short period to yield high profitability. 
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However, it also resulted in some investors opting out of such technology and even relying on rumors, leading to significant financial losses. 
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Therefore, it would be essential to convey the effectiveness and convenience of such digitization and benefit active market participants of the global economy.
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