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What kind of food reminds you of your childhood and why?

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It is tteokbokki of paper cup and soda of peach taste. Because when I was a elementary school student, I ate these foods almost everyday. And my friend who ate these with me is my best friend.

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Hi Yun! :) 

The taste, smell, and texture of food can be extraordinarily evocative, bringing back memories not just of eating food itself but also of place and setting. Food is an effective trigger of deeper memories of feelings and emotions, internal states of the mind and body.

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It is tteokbokki of paper cup and soda of peach taste. Because when I was a elementary school student, I ate these foods almost everyday. 
>> It is Tteokbokki in a  paper cup and peach soda because when I was an elementary school student, I ate these almost everyday. 

And my friend who ate these with me is my best friend.
>> And the person who I eat this with is my best friend. 
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