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Do you have any concerns about your privacy online? Why? Why not?

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Yes, I always have conerns about my privacy online.
Specially, when I get any spam calls, I wonder how they get my phone number.
I am geting 3~5 spam calls a day.
Also there are many spam emails in my email account.
I'm annoyed the spams because I have to remove the spam emails and reject the spam calls.
Sometimes, I am afraid that such spams will cause serious problems.
For example, voicemail is a serious issue in Korea.
Many people are losting their money from the voicemail.
In the case of e-mail, when we open a spam e-mail, a computer virus is installed on the computer.

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Hi Jennifer! 
This kind of thing is really really dangerous! 
My husband also experienced it and he needed to change all passwords. 
It's actually time consuming and sometimes we need to change all. 

Yes, I always have conerns about my privacy online.
>>> CORRECT!
Specially, when I get any spam calls, I wonder how they get my phone number.
>>> Especially when I get a spam call, I wonder how I they got my phone number.
I am geting 3~5 spam calls a day.
>>> CORRECT!
Also there are many spam emails in my email account.
>>> Also, there are many spam emails in my email account.
I'm annoyed the spams because I have to remove the spam emails and reject the spam calls.
>>> Spam emails are annoying because I have to remove spam mail and reject spam calls.
Sometimes, I am afraid that such spams will cause serious problems.
>>> CORRECT!
For example, voicemail is a serious issue in Korea.
>>> CORRECT!
Many people are losting their money from the voicemail.
>>> Many people are losing money through voice mail. 
In the case of e-mail, when we open a spam e-mail, a computer virus is installed on the computer.
>>> In the case of e-mail, if you open a spam e-mail, a computer virus will be installed on your computer.

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