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What kind of food reminds you of your childhood and why?

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A lot of snacks remind me of my childhood.
Because before, I ate planty kinds of snacks and I can remind my childhood as remembering that snacks.
And I can remember them very easily because until now, I ate some of them.
So I can remember my childhood as remebering those snacks.

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Hi John! :) 

The taste, smell, and texture of food can be extraordinarily evocative, bringing back memories not just of eating food itself but also of place and setting. Food is an effective trigger of deeper memories of feelings and emotions, internal states of the mind and body.

PS: Be more specific with the snacks that you used to ate :) 
Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

A lot of snacks remind me of my childhood.
>> CORRECT

Because before, I ate planty kinds of snacks and I can remind my childhood as remembering that snacks.
>> Before, I eat plenty of snacks. 

And I can remember them very easily because until now, I ate some of them.
>> I can remember them very easily because until now I still eat some of them. 

So I can remember my childhood as remebering those snacks.
>> So I can remember my childhood when I eat those snacks. 

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