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Do you think your parents ate healthier food at your age than you do? How about your grandparents?

; Of course, the kinds of food were less than now, my parents ate healthier food at my age. Because in that time, there are no many junk food in everyday life yet. But now, there are so many instant foods and drink! In my grandparents' generation, Korea was so poor. I heard from my dad that my dad saw that people eat even pigeon....

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Hello, Michelle! ^^
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia

Of course, the kinds of food were less than now, my parents ate healthier food at my age.
>> Of course, the kinds of food were less than now, my parents ate healthier food when they were the same age as me.

Because in that time, there are no many junk food in everyday life yet. 
>> Because at that time, there are not much junk food in everyday life yet. 

But now, there are so many instant foods and drink! 
>> CORRECT!

In my grandparents' generation, Korea was so poor. 
>> CORRECT!

I heard from my dad that my dad saw that people eat even pigeon.
>> I heard from my dad that he saw that people eat even pigeons.
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