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Please write your thoughts about the popular statement, \"There\'s no place like home!\"

작성자: 류*선
2021-09-15 276

회원님의 영작문

"There is no place like home!" I think of that many times. When I'm out for a long time, I always miss home.
I feel excited even before I go out. But as time goes by, I miss the comfort of home. Especially when I go out with my daughter.
I feel tired easily. Then my husband and I always say the same thing. "I want to go home soon!" These days, when it is difficult to leave the house because COVID19, I have more time at home. While staying at home for a long time, I have found various hobbies that I can do at home with my family, and I am enjoying them. For example, I tried to do camping and swimming with my daughter. I discovered that I can enjoy a variety of hobbies at an affordable price. In addition, It is good that there are more opportunities for self-development online at home. I want to use it a lot to save my time. I know there are so many things going on in my house.
I am grateful that I can live a happy daily life with my family in a comfortable home.

Thank you!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

I am also happy to know your personal and family life, Jane! You deserve to enjoy and live a meaningful life!-Faith-
"There is no place like home!" 
>> CORRECT
I think of that many times. 
>> CORRECT
When I'm out for a long time, I always miss home.
>> When I'm out for a long time, I always miss home.
OR I feel homesick when I am away from home for a long time.
I feel excited even before I go out. 
>> I always feel excited even before I go out. 
But as time goes by, I miss the comfort of home. Especially when I go out with my daughter.
>> But as time goes by, I miss the comfort of my home especially when I go out with my daughter.
I feel tired easily. 
>> I also feel tired easily.
Then my husband and I always say the same thing. 
>> Then, my husband and I always say the same thing. 
"I want to go home soon!" 
>> CORRECT
OR I want to get home immediately.
These days, when it is difficult to leave the house because COVID19, I have more time at home. 
>> These days, when it is difficult to leave the house because of COVID19, I have more time at home. 
While staying at home for a long time, I have found various hobbies that I can do at home with my family, and I am enjoying them. 
>> While staying at home for a long time, I have found various hobbies that I can do here with my family, and I am enjoying them. 
For example, I tried to do camping and swimming with my daughter. 
>> CORRECT
I discovered that I can enjoy a variety of hobbies at an affordable price. 
>> CORRECT
OR I found out pleasurable hobbies without spending much.
In addition, It is good that there are more opportunities for self-development online at home. 
>> CORRECT
I want to use it a lot to save my time. 
>> I want to use them a lot to save my time. 
I know there are so many things going on in my house.
>> CORRECT
I am grateful that I can live a happy daily life with my family in a comfortable home.
>> CORRECT
OR I am grateful that I can live a happy life with my family in the comfort of my own home.
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