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Where do you plan to build your own house? Why?

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I never thought about where I would build my house. Maybe later, when I'm older, I'll build a house in America. But I have no idea where to build detail about it. I think I will live more and then decide. I have lived in both the city and the countryside. So, I know the advantages and disadvantages about traits. I want to choose a mid-size city because I don't want to live in isolation, and I don't want to live in competition with too many people. I want to live in a quiet and diverse place where I can engage in social activities and enjoy a cultural life. My husband and I are pastors. So, we will be moving a lot. Sometimes moving a lot can be tiring and scary. I have lived in one place in Korea for 30 years. So I'm not used to moving. When I came to America, many things were a challenge for me. The United States is so large that it is often difficult to see each other. I want to stay where I can easily see the people I love.

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Hello, Jane! I hope your dream comes true. May your family stick together wherever you go!-Faith-
I never thought about where I would build my house. 
>> CORRECT
OR The location where I want to build my house hasn't crossed my mind yet. 
Maybe later, when I'm older, I'll build a house in America. 
>> Maybe later, when I'm older, I'll build a house here in America. 
But I have no idea where to build detail about it. 
>> But I have no idea where to build it.
I think I will live more and then decide. 
>> I think I will live here more and then decide. 
I have lived in both the city and the countryside. 
>> I have lived both in a city and the countryside. 
So, I know the advantages and disadvantages about traits. 
>> So, I know the advantages and disadvantages of them. 
I want to choose a mid-size city because I don't want to live in isolation, and I don't want to live in competition with too many people. 
>> I want to choose a mid-size city because I don't want to live in isolation, and I also don't want to live in competition with too many people. 
I want to live in a quiet and diverse place where I can engage in social activities and enjoy a cultural life. 
>> CORRECT
My husband and I are pastors. So, we will be moving a lot. 
>> My husband and I are pastors so we will be moving a lot. 
Sometimes moving a lot can be tiring and scary.
>> CORRECT
OR Sometimes, migration can be exhausting and scary.
I have lived in one place in Korea for 30 years. So I'm not used to moving. 
>> I had lived in one place in Korea for 30 years so I'm not used to moving. 
When I came to America, many things were a challenge for me. 
>> Since I came to America, many things have challenged me. 
The United States is so large that it is often difficult to see each other. 
>> CORRECT
I want to stay where I can easily see the people I love.
>> CORRECT

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