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I will explain why kids will read books
That is because kids can learn the letter
My second reason is kids can learn about the Great
My third reason is kids can read the masterpiece
Finally, we can use all knowledge in privacy

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I will explain why kids will read books
>> I will explain why kids should read books.

That is because kids can learn the letter
>> Kids should read books because they can learn about letters.

My second reason is kids can learn about the Great
>>  They can learn about great things. 

My third reason is kids can read the masterpiece
>> They can read masterpieces.

Finally, we can use all knowledge in privacy
>> Finally, we can apply in our lives all the knowledge we learned through reading.

Hello, Joey! Awesome job! It's really great that you know the importance of reading.  Please share the knowledge you gained  through reading with your friends and classmates, so that they'll learn more about the world around us.
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