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When I springs of movies, I think of popcorn, movie theaters, Marvel, and nights. Movie theaters remind me of the current corona virus! Because of the corona virus, we watch movies at home these days, but sometimes when you watch a movie at home, it reminds me of the days when you watched a movie with my family or friends at the cinema. Marvel is my favorite movie. It was one of the most impressive and memorable movies I've ever see! There are a lot of series, so it's fun to choose from. I watch movies at night. Whether it's a scary movie or an action movie, I can't feel it when I watch it in the daytime. I hope one day I will be able to see a movie at the cinema again someday~

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Hi there, Maria!
^_^

I am a movie fan, too. Thus, I can totally relate with your sentiments.
Just like you, I enjoyed watching superhero movies by MCU (Marvel Cinematic Universe).
My favorite is Spiderman, I must say.
Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework. You di a good job!
I will talk to you again on Thursday next week. See you!^^

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__T. Mayleen :)


When I springs of movies, I think of popcorn, movie theaters, Marvel, and nights.
>>> When I hear the word movie, I think of popcorn, movie theaters, Marvel Studios, and movie nights.
Movie theaters remind me of the current corona virus!
>>> Movie theaters remind me of the current pandemic.
Because of the corona virus, we watch movies at home these days, but sometimes when you watch a movie at home, it reminds me of the days when you watched a movie with my family or friends at the cinema.
>>> We watch movies at home these days because of Covid-19. We can't help but remembers the days when we could freely go to the cinema with our family and friends.
Marvel is my favorite movie. It was one of the most impressive and memorable movies I've ever see!
>>> My favorite movies are by Marvel. They released the most impressive and memorable movies I've ever seen!
There are a lot of series, so it's fun to choose from.
>>> There are a lot of movies to choose from, so it fun.
I watch movies at night.
>>> CORRECT
Whether it's a scary movie or an action movie, I can't feel it when I watch it in the daytime.
>>> CORRECT
I hope one day I will be able to see a movie at the cinema again someday~
>>> I hope one day, I will be able to see a movie at the cinema again.
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