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Which one do you think is better, being a boss or being a leader? Explain your answer.

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I don¡¯t know what is different between a boss and being a leader, because they are the top of a group. But I think a leader is better than a boss. Because the word ¡®leader¡¯ can provide an image of kindness and familiar.

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Hi Yun:)

boss manages their employees, while a leader inspires them to innovate, think creatively, and strive for perfection. Every team has a boss, but what people need is a leader who will help them achieve greatness.

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I don¡¯t know what is different between a boss and being a leader, because they are the top of a group. 
>> I don¡¯t know what is different between a boss and a leader because they are the top of a group. 

But I think a leader is better than a boss. 
>> CORRECT

Because the word ¡®leader¡¯ can provide an image of kindness and familiar
>> The word "leader" can provide an image of kindness and familiarization. 
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