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Hi, Shin!

This very informative. The corrections I gave here are mostly on the incomplete words and the missing articles. If you will have any questions, feel free to send me a message or ask me in class. ^^ Have a great day!

~Elica~

The two table charts illustrate the changes in the proportion of the sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in the two different year and in UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden.

>> The two table charts illustrate the changes in the proportion of the sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in the two different years and in the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden. 

 

 Overall, it is clear that both UK and Switzerland showed dramatically increase in two categories. 

>>Overall, it is clear that both UK and Switzerland showed a dramatic increase in two categories. 

However, the rest of countries marginally went up and, rather, Sweden and Denmark experienced a slight decrease in the sales of Fairtrade-labelled banana.

>>However, the rest of the countries marginally went up, and, rather, Sweden and Denmark experienced a slight decrease in the sales of Fairtrade-labelled bananas.

 

  Looking at the graphs more closely, one can see that the sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee in UK and Switzerland were 1.5 million and 3 million in 1994, but they drastically rose to 20 million and 6 million respectively in 2004. 

>> Looking at the graphs more closely, one can see that the sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee in the UK and Switzerland were 1.5 million and 3 million in 1994, but they drastically rose to 20 million and 6 million respectively in 2004.

The rest three countries insignificantly increased by 0.2 to 0.7 million in the sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee. 

>>The other three countries insignificantly increased by 0.2 to 0.7 million in the sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee.

When it comes to the sales of Fairtrade-labelled banana, likewise, surges were seen in UK and Switzerland. 

>>When it comes to the sales of Fairtrade-labelled bananas, likewise, surges were seen in UK and Switzerland.

Nevertheless, surprisingly, there were the only two countries that showed a decline. 

>>CORRECT

One of them was Sweden, which slightly dropped in 2004 and another was Denmark, which roughly halved from 2 million in 1994 to 0.9 million in 2004. 

>>CORRECT

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