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How do you spend your holidays now in light of the COVID-19 pandemic?

Before the Pandemic, most people used to gether whole extended family or go for a trip during holidays. In my case, my family used to go to a theater. Because Every big holiday, There were movies released for holidays. But we don't go to the theater anymore. It is not only to prevent infection, but also there is no interesting movie due to the Pandemic. Movie market is declining. So I chose not to go somewhere else, just went to cafes near my home when it is not crowded. It was So ordinary holidays.. maybe I should do something meaningful next holiday.

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Good evening, Yu Jeong! 

Thank you for taking the time to answer the Homework question. 

Please take a look at the corrected version of the answer below: 

Before the pandemic, most people used to gather their whole extended family or go on a trip during the holidays. In my case, my family used to go to the theater because during big holidays, there are movies that are released. But this time, we don't go to the theater anymore, not just to prevent COVID-19, but also because there are no interesting movies to watch due to the pandemic. The movie market is declining. I just go to cafes near my home that are not crowded. I spent my holiday in an ordinary way, maybe I should do something meaningful the next holiday. 

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I enjoyed reading your answer for this question! I also miss going to the theater, even though I don't frequently watch movies on the big screen. I guess I just miss having the option of being able to go to the movies whenever I want to. :) 

~Miya^^
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