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Which hobbies are the most popular in your country?

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Many Koreans are very much interested in health
So the most popular in my country of hobbies is things related to exercise
For instance, hike, yoga and gym
Privately, My hobby is Korea traditional drum, janggu

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Good evening, Hae Lyeong!

Thank you for submitting your answer. 
I think it is also the same here in my country.
A lot of people are very much interested in health too.
I think it's good to know that many people are concerned about their health.
But I think, as long as we enjoy our hobbies - no matter what they are, they will still be good for us.
I think doing something we like and enjoy helps us have peace of mind and relaxation. ^^

~Teacher Gina



Many Koreans are very much interested in health.
>> CORRECT.
So the most popular in my country of hobbies is things related to exercise
>>So the most popular hobbies in my country are things related to exercise.
For instance, hike, yoga and gym
>> For instance, hiking, yoga and going to a gym.
Privately, My hobby is Korea traditional drum, janggu
>> Privately, my hobby is playing the Korean traditional drum which is janggu.
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