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Have you ever stayed at a really exotic hotel, such as a castle or an ice hotel?

작성자: 류*선
2021-09-27 368

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I have never experienced that. If I have a chance to stay at a really exotic hotel, I want to try to stay there. I usually stay at a standard hotel. I remember the worst hotel in New York. When my husband was a University student in Washington DC, we didn't have enough money to enjoy a good quality hotel. So whenever we traveled, we researched the best hotel deal. On Christmas of 2017, we stayed in New York. I think back then that it was very cold. I don't like the cold. So it was a hard time for me. However, I could see beautiful Christmas trees and decorated buildings and crowded people on the road. It was a good time except for the cold weather. Before I got back to the hotel, I expected that I would go to a warm place soon. But my hotel was still cold inside. I couldn't take off my jacket during the sleep. My husband and I talk about money. My husband held my cold hand while I slept. We thought Although we do not have the money to enjoy a good hotel, we have one precious memory.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

I could imagine what it was like to have white Christmas, Jane! It must be memorable but I'm sorry to hear about that cold hotel. Anyway, I agree that life is about who you have not what you have!-Faith-
I have never experienced that. 
>> CORRECT
If I have a chance to stay at a really exotic hotel, I want to try to stay there. 
>> CORRECT
OR If given a chance to stay at a really exotic hotel, I would love to.
I usually stay at a standard hotel. 
>> CORRECT
I remember the worst hotel in New York. 
>> CORRECT
OR I remember my most embarrassing hotel experience in New York.
When my husband was a University student in Washington DC, we didn't have enough money to enjoy a good quality hotel. 
>> CORRECT
So whenever we traveled, we researched the best hotel deal. 
>> CORRECT
OR So whenever we traveled, always looked for a low-end hotel.
On Christmas of 2017, we stayed in New York. 
>> At Christmas of 2017, we stayed in New York. 
I think back then that it was very cold. 
>> Back then, I think it was very cold. 
I don't like the cold. 
>> I don't like cold weather. 
So it was a hard time for me. 
>> CORRECT
However, I could see beautiful Christmas trees and decorated buildings and crowded people on the road. 
>> However, I could see beautiful Christmas trees, decorated buildings and crowded people on the streets. 
It was a good time except for the cold weather. 
>> CORRECT
Before I got back to the hotel, I expected that I would go to a warm place soon. 
>> CORRECT 
OR Before I got back to the hotel, I was really looking forward to get back to a warm place.
But my hotel was still cold inside. 
>> Unfortunately, the hotel room was still cold inside. 
I couldn't take off my jacket during the sleep. 
>> I couldn't take off my jacket during my sleep. 
My husband and I talk about money. 
>> My husband and I talked about money. 
My husband held my cold hand while I slept. 
>> CORRECT 
We thought Although we do not have the money to enjoy a good hotel, we have one precious memory.
>> We thought although we do not have money to enjoy a good hotel, we have one precious memory.
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