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Hello, Dong Yun!

Your homework was to answer the following:

What do you like about autumn? List at least three activities you can do in autumn.

However, you didn't answer them well.
Let's talk about this in class, okay? See you!

__T. Mayleen :)


1. Good.
>>> Autumn is a good season.
2. Fell happy l
>>> I feel happy in autumn.
3. Lip collorfle
>>> Leaves are colorful in autumn.
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