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I'm going to make a rule that is about students shouldn't take other friends' things because my friends take others' things and trifle with them.

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Hi Kane! :)

School rules are usually associated with classroom management and school discipline. In organization or institution is formed because a goal needs to be reached. In order for these goals to be reached, there must be a set of rules, regulations, and policies to be followed so it is the same thing for schools. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I'm going to make a rule that is about students shouldn't take other friends' things because my friends take others' things and trifle with them.
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