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Life without siblings

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If I have no siblings,then there will be disadvantages, and advantages.First, disadvantage is the life will be little boring because when I grow up, I can talk with my relatives or family. However If there are not siblings then I can't talk about my sibling story. Second, advantage is I can eat chicken's leg.(In Korea, someone who is bigger than me , then I can eat that part.) And, if the destiny of sibling is the sibling is peer with me, then there are not risks that I fight with my siblings.

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If I have no siblings,then there will be disadvantages, and advantages.
>> If I had no siblings, there would be disadvantages and advantages.

First, disadvantage is the life will be little boring because when I grow up, I can talk with my relatives or family.
>> The disadvantage is that life would be a little boring.  When I grow up, I can talk with my relatives or family.

However If there are not siblings then I can't talk about my sibling story. 
>> However, if I didn't have siblings, I couldn't talk about my stories to anyone.

Second, advantage is I can eat chicken's leg.
>> The advantage is that I can eat chicken legs.

(In Korea, someone who is bigger than me , then I can eat that part.) 
>> In Korea, if there's someone older than another person, the younger person can eat that part.

And, if the destiny of sibling is the sibling is peer with me, then there are not risks that I fight with my siblings.
>> Moreover, if I am close to my sibling, I won't have fights with him/her.

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