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[Autumn Season, Family Photo Festival]

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If I can make festival in September, I think there will be an [Autumn Season, Family Photo Festival]. I really want to hold a festival like this where, if I choose a place where they can take a beautiful photo everywhere, I choose a theme, and give out generous prizes to the family who took the prettiest family photo. Actually, photo will come out better in spring, but also autumn has its own pretty charms, so if your family looks happy, I think that would be the best family photo ever. I want to create a festival that makes family memories and enjoys receiving prizes too.

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Hello there, Maria!
(^___^)

I liked your idea and you have a good intention.
Hopefully, once the pandemic is people, families will be able to travel and spend some good time again.
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
I will see you later in class.^^

__T. Mayleen :)


If I can make festival in September, I think there will be an [Autumn Season, Family Photo Festival].
>>> If I can make a festival in September, I will start an 'Autumn Season Family Photo Festival'.
I really want to hold a festival like this where, if I choose a place where they can take a beautiful photo everywhere, I choose a theme, and give out generous prizes to the family who took the prettiest family photo.
>>> I really want to hold a festival like this where I can choose a place where they will take a beautiful photos, I choose a theme, and give out generous prizes to the family with the prettiest photo/picture.
Actually, photo will come out better in spring, but also autumn has its own pretty charms, so if your family looks happy, I think that would be the best family photo ever.
>>> Actually, photos will come out better in spring, but autumn has its own charms, so if your family looks happy, I think that would be the best memory to capture ever.
I want to create a festival that makes family memories and enjoys receiving prizes too.
>>> I want to create a festival that will help families make fun memories and they can win prizes, too.
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