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Writing: How do you feel when you can't reach someone's phone in an emergency situation?
It could be anxious as the situation creates a growing sense of unease. I would try to make a call as much time as possible to finally reach the other. Sending messages could be another way to let the other know how the situation has been going on but, it does not seem to deliver clearly about the real intensity of the situation.

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Hello Jimin!

Thank you for answering the question tonight.  ") Keep on doing your writing homework if you have time. :)


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It could be anxious as the situation creates a growing sense of unease.

>>Correct.

I would try to make a call as much time as possible to finally reach the other.

>>I would try to make a call as much time as possible to finally reach the other person.

Sending messages could be another way to let the other know how the situation has been going on but, it does not seem to deliver clearly about the real intensity of the situation.

>> Sending messages could be another way to let the other person know how the situation has been going on, but it does not seem to deliver a clear message about how intense the situation is.

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