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How different do you think is the generation now from the generation before?

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I am pretty sure I'm an older generation.
Because I feel often big gab between me and my daughter.
For example, my daughter' generation enjoys shortening long sentences to a few letters.
Also I can't understand their fashion style.
They like to wear loose or revealing style clothes.
Their favorite songs are too fast.
I remember my mother said the same thing when I was a student.
I think we need to make an effort to understand them in order to get along well with them.

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Hi Jennifer! :)

I think this is true. The generations before is very different from now. It varies in different aspects like technology, fashion, education and etc. 

I think your answer is great. :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I am pretty sure I'm an older generation.
>> I am pretty sure I'm one of the older generation.

Because I feel often big gab between me and my daughter.
>> It's because I often feel that I have a big gap from my daughter. 

For example, my daughter' generation enjoys shortening long sentences to a few letters.
>> 
For example, my daughter's generation enjoys abbreviating long words and sentences. 

Also I can't understand their fashion style.
>> Also, I can't understand their fashion style.

They like to wear loose or revealing style clothes.
>> They like to wear loose or revealing clothes.

Their favorite songs are too fast.
>> Their favorite are rap songs. 

I remember my mother said the same thing when I was a student.
>> I remember that my mother said the same thing when I was a student.

I think we need to make an effort to understand them in order to get along well with them.
>> CORRECT
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