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what will I do in my free time with my friends

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I will do in my free time with my friends, I will go to the playground with my friends.
That is because we can meet more friends in playground
My second reason is there are many to play things in playground
My third reason is there are many fun things in playground
Finally, almost everyone likes to playing in playground

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Homework: What do you like doing with your friends in your free time?

I will do in my free time with my friends, I will go to the playground with my friends.
>> I like playing with my friends in my free time. I like going to the playground with them.

That is because we can meet more friends in playground
>> That is because we can meet more friends there.

My second reason is there are many to play things in playground
>> The second reason is that there are many things to play there.

My third reason is there are many fun things in playground
>> The third reason is that there are many fun things there.

Finally, almost everyone likes to playing in playground
>> Finally, almost everyone likes to play there.

Hi, Joey! Thank you for doing your homework! Please don't forget to use a period (.) at the end of a sentence that makes a statement. 

 

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