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Hi, Shin!

Thank you for sharing this. Have a good day. ^^

~Elica~

There are a lot of famous business people in the world, but the first person that comes to mind is my mother, who is the most respectable boss for me.

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 She has run a Korean restaurant for about 10years. 

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It is not a big restaurant, but she engaged in everything from the design of the building to the recipes of the foods. 

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The restaurant offers a lot of good foods and the representative one is the Korean traditional food called ¡°»ï°èÅÁ¡±, which means a ginseng chicken soup. 

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Moreover, customers can enjoy the Korean traditional alcohol ¡°¸·°É¸®¡±, which is made of rice and by her.

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 My mother appeared TV show, which introduced healthy foods and its recipes[résəpi]. 

>> My mother appeared on a TV show, which introduced healthy foods and their recipes[résəpi]. 

The restaurant and its foods were introduced by one of the most renowned regional newspaper companies in my hometown.

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There are several (opinions/notions/thoughts) what I think of her. 

>>I have several notions of her. 

First, she is strong in critical situations. 

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she has experienced several crises about the business by economic stagnancy. 

>>She has experienced several crises about the business by economic stagnancy.

However, she was able to overcome the situations and keep running the restaurant. 

>>However, she was able to overcome the situation and keep running the restaurant. 

Second, she is so diligent. 

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Her diligence motivates me to work harder. 

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Lastly, she is so positive and hospitable. 

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She should be hospitable as an owner, but it¡¯s not easy to always respond to customers¡¯ complaints with a smile. 

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Q) which word is proper in the sentence? (opinions/notions/thoughts)

>>All of these words can be used, but here's the difference among these words. "Opinion" is a point of view or what someone thinks while "notion" is more like a belief  and "thought" is more like the basic or the start of thinking. 

 

 

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