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I liked the Tekken game the most. The reason was because at that time...
It's because it's my favorite game.

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Classic childhood games are timeless for a reason. Not only are they simple to grasp and fun to play, they also teach social skills and can enrich the lives of the young players. I t is because of this that many parents will often look to pass on their favorite childhood games to their offspring.

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I liked the Tekken game the most. 
>> I like Tekken the most. 

The reason was because at that time...
>> The reason is that I used to play it a lot when I was a kid. 

It's because it's my favorite game.
>> It was my favorite game. 
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