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How close are you to your extended family?

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I live close with my extended family. It tooks 15 minutes to Grandmother¡¯s house by car and it tooks 15minutes to cousin¡¯s house by walk.
I¡¯m especially close with my cousin. He is same age with me so we had graduated same school and academy. We talk alot of things during preparing to go to college.

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I live close with my extended family. 
>>> I live close to my extended family.
It tooks 15 minutes to Grandmother¡¯s house by car and it tooks 15minutes to cousin¡¯s house by walk.
>>> It takes 15 minutes to go to my grandmother's house by car, and 15 minutes to my cousin's house on foot.
I¡¯m especially close with my cousin. He is same age with me so we had graduated same school and academy. 
>>> I'm especially close to my cousin. We are of the same age so we graduated in the same school and academy.
We talk alot of things during preparing to go to college.
>>> We talked a lot of things when we were preparing for college.
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