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In Korea, common vegetable are garlic and cabbage.
Cabbage make kimchi that is soul food in Korean.
Also garlic is ingredient of the almost foods.
Common fruit is apple and tangerine.
They are many people like it.

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In Korea, common vegetable are garlic and cabbage.
>> In Korea, the most common vegetables are garlic and cabbage.
Cabbage make kimchi that is soul food in Korean.
>> Cabbages are used in making Kimchi, which is a soul food in Korea.
Also garlic is ingredient of the almost foods.
>> Also, garlic is used in almost all kinds of food in Korea.
Common fruit is apple and tangerine.
>> On the other hand, the most common fruits are apples and tangerines.
They are many people like it.
>> Many people like it.
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