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Describe a movie that inspired you the most.

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As a moviegoer, it is difficult for me to pick the most inspiring movie. Amongst all the excellent films, ¡°Spotlight¡± has a substantial impact on me. The movie is based on an actual event that happened in Boston. The story is about the process that the local paper, The Boston Globe, went through to reveal that Catholic priests sexually assaulted the number of children. I was drawn to how journalists try to put their effort in each case to work seamlessly to uncover the truth and not surrender despite substantial pressure on them. I believe that was the time I thought I will start my career somewhere near journalism industry. Even not being journalist myself, I believe working within the industry would help me enlighten the truth to the global audience.

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As a moviegoer, it is difficult for me to pick the most inspiring movie. 
>>> correct          
Amongst all the excellent films, ¡°Spotlight¡± has a substantial impact on me. 
>>> correct   
The movie is based on an actual event that happened in Boston. 
>>> correct      
The story is about the process that the local paper, The Boston Globe, went through to reveal that Catholic priests sexually assaulted the number of children. 
>>> The story is about the process that the local paper, The Boston Globe, went through to reveal that Catholic priests sexually assaulted a certain number of children.   
I was drawn to how journalists try to put their effort in each case to work seamlessly to uncover the truth and not surrender despite substantial pressure on them. 
>>> correct    
I believe that was the time I thought I will start my career somewhere near journalism industry. 
>>>  I believe that was the time I thought I will start my career somewhere near the journalism industry. 
>>> OR: I believe that was the time I thought I will start my career somewhere related to the journalism industry.     
Even not being journalist myself, I believe working within the industry would help me enlighten the truth to the global audience.
>>>   Even not being a journalist myself, I believe working within the industry would help me enlighten the truth to the global audience.

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